Haugkall: Sorry but what's the improvement, a slightly more outlined cheek bone? There are two things, rendering (shade/color), and the underlying forms, (the sketch). These to look almost identical, haven't improved at the subject matter either soooo, you're not studying correctly. Sorry someone had to say it.
Thoth: Lol haugkall, if you honestly want to critque someone's improvement , you'd need a lot more examples of their work between the comparitive years... Any douche can pick apart a single example...so opinion or not, you're just being a presumptious d bag saying shit like they're not studying properly. But w.e im sure rs doesnt give two shits about your input.
Haugkall: Toth personally I love critisicm if it's constructive. In fact I've gone as far as to pay for it on one ocassion. Im doing rs a favor, as is your teacher when he's giving you a bad grade. It's not something to cry about, it's something to learn from. If rs chooses to ignore my crtique, she does so at her own peril. By saying she has only highlighted the cheek I'm implying she needs to work on her anatomy, would you prefer it if she never improved. Now that's rude. She is also wasting what talent she has on gay, hipster rap, pop culture stuff. Maybe she doesn't know there is nicer stuff to draw, you're a bad friend of rs by keeping her down and in the dark like this.
Haugkall: You let your emotions get the better of you forerunner. Stop feeling and start thinking for once in your life, relax. Let's not deny rs sound advice okay?
Pocodile: Word of simple advice to you Haugkall, Maybe you shouldn't waste your own life on this, seeing as how you ARE an adult, maybe you should get a job and make yourself ACTUALLY usefull.
That is the only thing I have to say about the matter.
JB_: Haugkall works as a professional art critic. Aspiring artists will thank him in the future for pointing out their flaws. He is also donating 5kr to the Save the Children fund every time he does groceries.
Haugkall: How is helping out a fellow human being wasting time? Besides my computer is broke so I've got an excuse to post comments on here with my ipod, unlike you Pocadil. And lastly I provide a service to society so you failed at sending me any constructive criticism, shame on you. Rs I hope you manage to hone your talents despite being surrounded by people like pocadile and forunner who would hate to see you draw anything but gay cartoons, don't ask me why, strange.
Pocodile: You want criticism, fine, lets start with how you are only basing your opinion of ONE redraw, instead of multiple, and you are masking the fact you don't have much room to speak since no one really knows YOUR actual artistic talent on the gallery so they can't compair to see your actual ability, maybe you're criticism would seem more legit and more liked, if you didn't base them off one drawing and only comment on one damn post, that isn't helpfull, and the "*sigh*" what are you? A 9 year old RPer from 2015?
I don't care if you dislike what I've said, because..
"Am I not allowed to have an opinion?"Haugkall.
Haugkall: Alright jb. And Pocadile you seem too upset, it can't be healthy. What's wrong with 9 year old roleplayers? I skimmed over some of rs's drawings and they all look more or less like the one up there. She has talent but the anatomy could be improved and it's a shame she only draws gays and hipster/rap stuff. I think she has the potential to be so much more, is that so bad pocadile? My personal "art" I wouldn't want to be associated with this site, I don't like to brag either. But since you ask let's just say that I have on more than one occasion been paid over 200$ for a piece of "art" and it might become full time work one day. Anyway enough about me, Pocadile could we agree on that we should encourage rs to improve at her drawing and not draw gay rappers and gays?
Pocodile: I looked at the most recent 5 pages, the only gay shit was this one and maybe another, the rest was justnt even gay, the only thing gay about her/his gallery is probably the fact she's mainly been drawing girls? And please, the only rappery thing I saw was a single "oc?" with a hood up.
Nice try.
and wbtw, yes everyone had room for improvment.
I encorage it, but still.
forerunner2: @Haugkall: you know what, i feel like i have to say this then ill shut up for good, he was only trying to defend you but u backstabbed him, there im done, you can say what u want but i have better things to do really
Haugkall: Forerunner his message could just as well have been interpeted in a sarcastic manner since it was quite random. He probably was bothered by the "useful to society" comment. It's a stupid thing to measure your worth by. Flipping hamburgers or unpackaging packages is about as much an accomplishment as having a bf/gf. Anyone can do it, such mundane tasks are sometimes neccessary for a person to get by, but to be proud of it or brag about it shows bad character, Pocadile. The rapping type is all about status, i waz a kangmah life matter 13 inches guurl. So silly, Pocadile instead of playing the rapper's game and try diss me because I don't have this or that, which isn't even true btw. Try engage in the actual argument and let me know what, is so bd about encouraging rs to draw greater things than all this faggotry or better for that matter. If I was christian I'd say you all need jesus, but since I'm not I'll say you need culture BADLY!
Pocodile: And now for my final statement, I can't tell if you're trying to me RAPIST(someone whome has sexual intercoarse with someone without consent) or RAPPER(the singer),and please, what's wrong with being gay? I am actually curious to see the answer before I fucking completely leave the conversation.
Haugkall: I meant rapper, by which I mean crappy sub cultures basically. Yo bruh, mah this and mah that. Attitude, kangnezz, modern fashion, hipsterness, meme gangz and freckin skateboards. Even the gamers to an extent, I guess you could associate it with group think, acting irrationally because you're suppose to fit into some group. Extreme stupidity abd it's most apparwnt aming the rappers, and rs is drawing pictures of these people, very bad.
As far as gayness goes, nothing wrong with it but they tend to whine about it or shove it in peoples faces. Something gay could also be used to describe effiminate men which many of rs drawings are of. Thats also bad since men are most happy when they're allowed to be manly abd eomen are most happy when they're allowed to be femine, art should ideally reflect that. Or would you prefer we make statues of crossdressing rappers pocadile and hold them up as an example for future generations of what to be? NO rs I think would benefit from drawing straight couples and maybe some heroic princes sa ing feminine princesses from...rapping ogres ;)
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That is the only thing I have to say about the matter.
I don't care if you dislike what I've said, because..
"Am I not allowed to have an opinion?"Haugkall.
Nice try.
and wbtw, yes everyone had room for improvment.
I encorage it, but still.
As far as gayness goes, nothing wrong with it but they tend to whine about it or shove it in peoples faces. Something gay could also be used to describe effiminate men which many of rs drawings are of. Thats also bad since men are most happy when they're allowed to be manly abd eomen are most happy when they're allowed to be femine, art should ideally reflect that. Or would you prefer we make statues of crossdressing rappers pocadile and hold them up as an example for future generations of what to be? NO rs I think would benefit from drawing straight couples and maybe some heroic princes sa ing feminine princesses from...rapping ogres ;)