lolis: excellent. I was riveted by the duality of the emotional play between Stephanie and Kailee...the sinister nature of love and the explosive, revenge and karmic justice -which tied everything together for a great ending! 10/10

boopy: I did like the chapter in the middle, which showed a thematic link between the stories we read and our real lives. I would also rate this a 10/10

lolis: I started to tear up at the part when Stephanie told Ryan that she had to move to a new kingdom for the summer...We've all been there, right? I could totally relate to that scenario.

I think I'd like to attempt to draw this story....

lolis: ...Here you go:
http://flockmod.com/gallery/index.php?q=/image/587634.png